Sarah's Project: Major argument is we sometimes feel life we are in a race through life. The running scene was very well put together. Make more connections with each scene change, make sure it flows.
Greg's Project: Major argument is the world of technology and its laws are ever changing. The design is creative and well put together. Add sound or music to enhance the readers experience.
Kay's Project: Major argument is Kay is proud of her son and his accomplishments. Very smooth transitions from one picture to another. Maybe include wording to express the feelings and the situation.
Kyle's Project: Major argument is "Knowledge speaks, but wisdom listens".Great setup and choice of famous quote. Add more affects and information and links within website. Increase font size and format.
Jifu's Project: Major argument is We as a world need to be saved from the monsters we have become. Great song choice, it set the mood. Entitle the piece in the beginning and add the credits and creators at the end.
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